C J is offering a critique of your first three chapters and synopsis. CJ Flood is the author of Infinite Sky and Nightwanderers. She lives in Bristol, where she is a lecturer in Creative Writing at Bath Spa University. In February, she volunteered with Help Refugees in Calais, sorting donations at the warehouse and teaching English at the informal camp there, nicknamed the Jungle. More recently she ran a creative writing session with Bristol Refugee Rights and Bath Spa University, and is hoping to do more work to support refugees and asylum seekers arriving in Bristol.